A Rose Poem by Kille and Brim (young poets)

A Rose

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You won't understand this one


A white rose whilts
A child weeps
A frozen heart melts
A soldier stands strong

The hurt build strong walls
The trusting gathers ice
The loving tries the door
The happy makes a key

A snowflake lands
A girl hides
A boy stops searching
A monster guards the castle

The warm heat the world
The smart make a grid
The hopful look in every cravase
The Brave suit up

A white rose is dead
A younge women breaks
A dark abiss swallows
A vase falls and shatters

The luck start anew
The listeners heal
The innocent brighten
The worried cries

Monday, February 18, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: smart,soldier
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ponnuswami Selvaraj 05 December 2017

Lovely poem although quite simple! 😃 I enjoyed listening to it. Also reading it 😀

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MCKENZi : ] 18 February 2008

you're right, i dont understand. what are you trying to say in this poem. : ] <3

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