A Rose Petal Comments

like the theme! the wording is good too. however -. -ithe main issue i have, is it looks, and sounds abit like prose (poetic prose) , it just dosent hv enough structure, dont worry though, you did this age twelve, and as you get older you will find a structure that suites you. :) - i recoment when you write a new poem, re-write it several times, in several styles, and see which stucktur fit you the best.