Wednesday, December 10, 2014

A Sighing Sonnet Comments

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Syllables plunge into an ancient songbook
Octaves and sestets of obsessive love
Perusing Petrarch's Canzoniere
Iambic portrayals of Laura de Noves
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Dan Reynolds 10 December 2014

The only line that stumbles a little for me, is line 2 stanza 2. That apart, it flows very nicely.

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Cherylyn Vardi

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