Saturday, November 24, 2007

A Silent Autumn Morning Comments

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Silence, is all I hear as I sit down on the frozen stump, silence, peaceful silence, until the lone bird cry’s out.

Shaking the bare trees that are reaching up to the sky.
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Ashley Sinclair
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Sonny Rainshine 24 November 2007

You evoke a beautiful scene here. Starting out with everything quiet and as if a signal, the bird's cry brings action to the scene-just as if a movie director had called out: 'Action'; then 'Cut'. Nice work.

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