indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

A Small Wish - Poem by indira babbellapati

allow just for once
to lose myself in
the mysterious world of yours
where thought flows across
valleys ocean rivers
caressing a tender leaf here
kissing a dainty flower there
brushing past a rising tide
cooling weary heel by the river
as i lie entangled in your
binding vine-arms...

19jan2010
02.16hrs


Comments about A Small Wish by indira babbellapati

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (2/12/2010 3:56:00 AM)


    caressing a tender leaf here
    kissing a dainty flower there
    brushing past a rising tide
    cooling weary heel by the river....................

    as tenderness kisses gloss of green
    breath of breeze smooches grin of green, wonderful rave up through metaphors, quite elegant too
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  • (2/11/2010 7:00:00 AM)


    Skillful use of metaphor used
    to compose this enchanting
    poem.10, for you.

    Love,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 3, 2010


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