' A Poem That Woke Me Up! ' Poem by indira babbellapati

' A Poem That Woke Me Up! '

Rating: 2.7


I dwell
In the absence
You left behind

That absence occupies me

I dabble
In the silence
You fill me with

That's my silent connect

This heart
Still sings
The moonlight sonata of yore

That silent score sustains me

My breath
Still draws in
The perfume dabbed on this skin

That silently nurtures hope in me

Every night
I bury tear for you
In my heart

That quenches my heart's thirst

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria C. Pires Costa 02 November 2011

This is a heartfelt poem indeed. An absence that has triggered beautiful lines! May hope stay with you, and may real presence flood your heart and mind with happy threads!

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Jerry Hughes 23 January 2012

...absolutely beautiful Indira, the bearing of your soul in words. Love, Jerry

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Karen I Banks 16 April 2012

nice poem i liked it

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Abhijeet S D 22 September 2012

Indira, was going through your poems....really nice Keep it up.

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 September 2012

And absolute silence to reckon with while u wake up....trez bien!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2022

That absence occupies me......it's very hard to measure its volume.

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Richard Antwi 13 July 2020

I dwell In the absence You left behind These are beautiful words but gives me bad memories

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2019

I dwell In the absence You left behind That absence occupies me I dabble In the silence You fill me with That's my silent connect - - - - - - - - - - -

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Aasiq the poet 15 November 2013

he will definitely come oneday i am sure the hand tousled your hair still twitches for you...thanks indira for the melodious lines....atp

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Alexander Coppedge 26 March 2013

You have a lot of sensitive feelings I feel you hold back on these concepts Afraid perhaps or not willing to share them Keep expressing yourself comfort start with one self

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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