Tuesday, March 13, 2012

A Smile Comments

Rating: 4.5

It costs nothing, but creates much.


It enriches those who receive, without impoverishing those who give.
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Amne ElAbdallah
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Khairul Ahsan 16 November 2013

This poem is simply beautiful! Thanks for pouring out these deep seated words from your heart, these are profound! 'If someone is to tired to give you a smile, leave one of yours.'...This needs editing, should be 'too tired' instead of 'to tired'. The last line: 'For, nobody needs a smile so much as those who have none to give.'...is priceless!

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Nnamdi Nwahara 13 March 2012

cool, thats nice seriously

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