anon ymous

A Story - Poem by anon ymous

There is a wine glass on the table. Once it was full.
There is a wine bottle on the table. Once it was filled
There is a knife on the table. Once it was clean.
There is a body on the table. Once it was alive
I have not been writing poems for very long, so I am asking for some constructive criticism

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  • (12/20/2011 5:08:00 PM)

    I think you don't choose the right words to use. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 14, 2012

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