Thursday, June 1, 2006

A Suicidal Tendency Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing at the cliff edge,
I must lean against the wind
To test its strength.
Will it hold me?
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Sharlie Goddard
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Chuck Audette 01 June 2006

Nice strong images and sensory descriptions. Lovely ending. -chuck

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