A Swing, It Is Poem by Ben Partenay

A Swing, It Is



the puzzle of it
the forth and back
push, pull,
please go
i miss you
the swingset
when you were
a child
weightlessness
trying to
get away
there is never
any escape
from how you
feel.

Ben Partenay
Wednesday, July 13, 2011
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Adeline Foster 12 August 2011

Good, of course it's not a Hiaku, but it is written in Haiku style. Try mine - Indebted - Adeline

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Gone Away 13 July 2011

I like this....nice analogy.

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