Tuesday, November 4, 2014

A Tragic Love Story Comments

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If all that separate me and you are elongated fingers
and all those events of my world for a little longer linger

Same control of my action, more control of other's reaction
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Anderson Archfield
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2019

There is no consequence for success and failure is noticed. The things taken are loved by you. Poor existence provokes thought. We expect that all should live happily. This poem is an excellent poem very well penned.10

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