A Tumult Of Water Poem by Leslie Philibert

A Tumult Of Water

Rating: 3.0


Water seeks a simple path, thoughtless
lines in the softer ground, a rushing

tumult of water and stones breaking
downwards and creating the face

of the drowning man, someone like this,
a to-be-ended, a lost, a water smacker

liquid runner, a dancer failing to bend
his feet to the moving ground, an unholy wetness

a face forced into a liquid laugh, no answer,
the shock of an obscene ballet

failing to contradict the rain and the salt
and the waves stopless and stopless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 09 October 2013

Some of the lines make sense alone, together no. A rewrite would be better.

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