A Walk Poem by Ian Keenan

A Walk

Rating: 5.0


Winter turns leaves swish
Like corn flakes kicked around,
Frosted paths moistened by the snow.
Straight stark trees,
Light broken by a hand
Upon my face.

A hill -
Below the feet
The never sleeping growth;
Breath hung on my shoulder,
Tugging at my sleeve.

Clouds leaning on the sun,
Big and bony winds
Assault the weak,
The mouths of warrens choke
With humus,
A white hand holds.

The dog barks,
Squirrels run,
A train throws back
The shouts of children;
Your small hand warms
Beneath my shirt.

A Walk
Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2016

The dog barks, Squirrels run, A train throws back The shouts of children; Your small hand warms Beneath my shirt. Such beautiful expressions of l ove. and nature. thank you. tony

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

Ian, definitely a gorgeous poem here, i like you pull readers mind (well at least it works for me) when you tell the story i felt like i am experiencing it...well done! ! loved it

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