Wednesday, May 16, 2007

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once I knew a person,
his sight was infinite, such as the sky
and I believe him,
he was hearing the voice of my soul,
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nasibeh Daneshvar
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Albert Wong 27 September 2008

This is your 2nd pc in a trial, also not yet in mood in sonnet write. I'm ging to read your other sonnets one by one. Yes, I like sonnet too, as I have tried once in 1 yr ago, but it was not attractive enough for the readers (critics) who did not have the interest to read sonnet (most people do not know sonnet) . I'm going to find information in the internet this evening, and intending to write it once again later. I like this poem..although it is not a sonnet yet.

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