'A Woman Needs To Know Her Place! ' Written By Bryan Cobaris Inspired By The Holy Spirit Poem by Bryan Cobaris

'A Woman Needs To Know Her Place! ' Written By Bryan Cobaris Inspired By The Holy Spirit



'A woman needs to know her place! ' written by Bryan Cobaris Inspired by The Holy Spirit

There's an epidemic spreading that has infected the human race.
It's carried within all of the women who don't know their place.
Most go undiagnosed because symptoms are easy to miss.
If it's ignored it destroys; just like a malignant cyst.

It makes some women think that they're just meant to cook and clean.
It makes them forget that they are princesses and queens.
It makes some believe that all they have is their looks.
They forget how celebrated they are in our history books.

This sickness spreads through bad examples and the message their sending.
It makes some women value 'likes', internet fame, and whatever's trending.
This illness leads them to believe they need validation from men.
Then they copy fake images; instead of seeing their own beauty within.

The cure for this disease is knowing what you are worth.
You're not here to give pleasure, be beaten, or just give birth.
You're not here to complete anyone; we should all strive to be whole.
You can't change anyone or save anyone...so don't take on that role.

A woman who knows her place is powerful, gorgeous, and smart.
She nurtures, she develops and she heals with her heart.
Now you know your place and you now know what to do.
Never forget the greatness that God placed inside of you.

Monday, March 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: women empowerment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to women all over the world. Remember who you are and become who God made you to be! Stay encouraged! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leah Ross 13 March 2017

Did the holy spirit inspire this write this could be taken anyway

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Jennifer B. 03 September 2019

Very thoughtful and beautiful.

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Doris 08 May 2018

This is wonderful

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Bryan C. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bryan Cobaris 13 March 2017

And I read your comment on my other poem. With all due respect please don't comment on my work without reading it in its entirety. If you don't understand it thats one thing. Just ask questions but to blatantly label the work racist (which is odd because I'm a black man) is a slap in the face to the message of accountability and empowerment that the poem conveys. I'm only commenting here because you blocked me from responding on the other poem. I didn't really understand that either.

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Bryan Cobaris 13 March 2017

Are you threatening to take it? And yes the Holy Spirit inspired it. I stand by what I write.

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