A World Of Silence (Song) Poem by annie tuck

A World Of Silence (Song)

Rating: 3.5


Quietly flowing
White
Dried clouds pass by
The gray me
Just watched their vanishing
Intently
Onto the castle of sand that I built
From gathering the stars
My tiny prayer
Falls
Waves that lay in waiting
Sweep you off your feet
(chorus)
a world of darkness.
a world of silence.
While the prayer that seems like it’ll vanish soon
Is fanned by the wind
Nevertheless, I continue to light it
While I messed up again and again
The waves that lay in waiting
Sweep away the castle of sand that I built
With chilled hands
Dried clouds pass by
The gray me
Just watched their vanishing
Intently
(chorus) (x2)
Darkness~
Silence~
A prayer~
What are they to you~?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Building a sand castle from stars is a great metaphor. Annie you should try a poem around that. Again, lyrics are just part of a song so can't comment on your final work. Do you intend posting songs on Youtube? Could be a way of getting comments on your whole creation. Mark

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