Abandoned Poem by Eloida Capuno

Abandoned

Rating: 5.0


i had to let you go
there is no point
in staying
you were gone
long ago
even before your
physical absence
you were here
but not felt
you look at me
but i don't see
me in your eyes

why should i keep you
i have lost you
we are no longer looking
at the same direction
our hearts no longer
beat in unison
i have lost you
i didn't know how
and why
and i feel abandoned

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 12 August 2013

Very touching write, gripping honesty of emotions.

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