Ablaze Poem by Joseph Caraveo

Ablaze

Rating: 4.0


I have a hundred dreams
A thousand desires
Couple of wishes
One burning fire

My wishes lead to dreams
Dreams lead to you
You started a fire
If you only knew

A little kid with matches
You know not what you do
You set ablaze this hungry heart
Wish you would feel it too


Joseph Edward Caraveo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amerie Smith 22 March 2010

Wow the comments on this poem were...well...RETARDED! How about plain English? Ablaze was just like its title...It is very well written, it jumps off the page, it is hot! I love it, it is very close to one I wrote years ago that won a huge poetry contest but mine was not this good!

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 28 December 2009

I don't think youshould encourage people to set fir to things, including people...V irresponsible tut tut

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