Thursday, April 7, 2005

Absorbent Comments

Rating: 4.4

There is something unexhausted of you
in this aging washed-out coat
and I lift it to my nose
to taste the smell that desires
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Joyelle Osburn
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Brett Ackerman 05 August 2006

The poem is very striking, resonating with some emotions I've dealt with throughout nearly 3 years. I appreciate very much that you've shared it and please extend a warm compliment to Joyelle from me- she rocks! Please keep on writing! Stay cool. Summer will soon be gone! -Debby Steinberg

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Brett Ackerman 29 July 2006

I really enjoyed this one on several different levels. I'm intrigued by your depth of bodily senses. Well done Joy!

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Debi Cimo 06 June 2005

This is germinal-the kind of poetry you can soak into. Thanks again for another phenomenal piece! Debi

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Joyelle Osburn

Joyelle Osburn

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