Saturday, September 13, 2014

Abysmally Lost Comments

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Standing
Meandering
Catatonic philandering
even so, hard love forlorn
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Jole Hans
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Roseann Shawiak 15 September 2014

Jole, very intense imagery and rhythm, an excellent poem. You have portrayed the title, Abysmally Lost, fully and completely within your words. It felt like I was wandering uncertainly with you, until realizing that I had become the wave. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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