Friday, June 20, 2014

Accept My Kicks Comments

Rating: 3.5

He misses my lyrics,
Am the sum to his mathematics;
I trust these aren't just tactics,
It is true what his mouth speaks…
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Muna Moons Ahmed
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Khairul Ahsan 21 June 2014

The poem would have been much, much nicer had you not gone for rhymes and let words flow out naturally.

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