Acknowledged Love Poem by Sierra Staten

Acknowledged Love

Rating: 4.5


The sun illuminates the world,
Not because I say so, but because
The sun is the sun,
And that is what the sun does.

The moon brightens the midnight sky,
Not because I tell it to,
But because the moon is the moon,
And that is what the moon must do.

Out of my control-
The grass will grow, The wind will blow
The ships will sail, the young will wail
And everything will die including I.

So realize now, before I go,
That these miracles happen-
Not because I tell it to;
But because it does.

I acknowledge these things,
As I acknowledge you, my love.
That you are worth everything I give
That you are a miracle,
Nonetheless, you are my miracle.

Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 23 November 2014

Aloha Sierra... [So realize now, before I go... That you are a miracle] Thank you for this out of my control write... for whatever reason this bit of a tune comes to my thoughts... If you love someone, set them free I am impressed with the ease that you have worked this subject... longing tenderness extrudes from your strings of thought... beautifully penned... Encore! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaaelw1two.

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2014

A powerful love poem, well articulated and penned from heart of hearts. Your employment of appropriate Similes to capture the bliss of love is quite commendable. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sierra Staten

Sierra Staten

Newman, California
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