Friday, January 25, 2008

Across The Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

Across the paper, the pen trips
Squiggles and curves shaping words
Characters of good and bad
Expressions of happiness and sad
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Sandra Fowler 26 January 2008

Writing is indeed a creative adventure. My applause for the three of you. As always, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 26 January 2008

A lyrical ode to the poetic muse written from three subtly differing points of view. Should I hazard a guess as to which verse belongs to whom? Let me try. Meggie wrote the first, JoJo the Second and Dodgy Dave the third. Now I've stuck my neck out. Great poem by the way, you three. Love Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (the hearts are for Meggie he he)

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Mary Gordley 25 January 2008

I really love this one! Keep up the good work team.

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