Addicted To Him Poem by Mandy Author2

Addicted To Him



Does he know? ,
I’m dependent on him,
When he falters,
So do I,
He’s my emotional control,
My confidant and friend,
My heart,
Mind and soul,
How could I begin to explain this? ,
Words are not enough,
To tell of my gratitude,
Yet I shy away,
For my ruin is in his hands,
I trust that he would not,
Knowingly hurt me,
But a single unkind word,
Can cause,
Unrepairable damage,
He has the power,
To destroy me,
With him I am,
Vulnerable,
Yet safer than,
I’ve ever been before,
When he offers to solve my problems,
It is so tempting,
But I cannot accept,
For when he is gone,
I will be on my own,
Once again left,
To fend for myself,
I must learn to cope,
With his absence,
Must overcome,
This addiction,
To his presence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 08 October 2010

Other than your use of commas at the end of every line, I really like this poem. It's well composed, honest, courageous and poignant. Well done.

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Ali Jafri 17 September 2010

Nicely written! the message really got to me.

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