Friday, June 20, 2008

After The Rain Comments

Rating: 3.0

let spring ring with resounding green
a lush that speaks of godly things
whose tumbling leaves I bear so near
while rain mists rays of cold fresh life
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Lolita Lollipop
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Greenwolfe 1962 10 September 2008

Aside from not being able to glean a meaning from this, there ore other things not done well. The less said the better. GW62

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