Elle Barr

Rookie - 10 Points (Philippines)

After The Short Surrender - Poem by Elle Barr

You just wanna give-up
To fight you are worn-out,
Life is so tough,
It’s just so rough.

It’s so easy to a bit quit,
It’s an easy alternative,
When it’s really exhausting,
And the journey’s so tiring.

When it gets so tricky,
And life seems so messy,
You can always sort of stop,
So that you won’t drop.

You also need a bit of rest,
To once again be at your best,
To once again fight the battle,
After the short surrender.


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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 12, 2010



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