Monday, March 17, 2008

Aftermath Of A Party Comments

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The room looks lonely now
In despair of the nights activity
Bedraggled and covered
With spilt alcohol and ash
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Bunny Baker
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Don Mcwilliams 17 March 2008

Brilliant, JT. A fascinating read, conveying a sense of sadness and dread. Both of which I have felt after parties, God knows. Erin Go Bragh, Don

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Jurietta Duraan 17 March 2008

Wistful... like the end of a movie... I can almost hear the fading music in the background. Well written. Yuri

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