Agony And Other Things Comments

Lilies and tulips were going to marry for the sake of thorned roses BIood was flowing slowly. All night you cried. /// nice; expressive

Hmmm....the next two verses are about pain and agony....the second i think more about regular repetitive pain.....like menstrual pain. The last one about the pain of heartbreak of love. I think.

There were questions in my head.....done with poetics and flair