Ellirie, you have some good and fascinating thoughts in your poem, they start out very clear then get muddied a bit. Possibly say your poem out loud and listen carefully for the rhythm and meanings to make sure they're clear to others. I often have to do that myself. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Ellirie, you have some good and fascinating thoughts in your poem, they start out very clear then get muddied a bit. Possibly say your poem out loud and listen carefully for the rhythm and meanings to make sure they're clear to others. I often have to do that myself. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn