Monday, September 8, 2014

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Our odourless and invisible friend,
We can play with you even inside a tent,
Y're odourless, you are invisible,
we can't see you but you are sensible,
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Lavanya Pati
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Lavanya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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