Thursday, November 29, 2007

Airow Comments

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you're lying on the ground motionless,
your breathing is slow and faint,
i guess my airow finally got you.
you're bleeding from your wound
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Belle elleb
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This is a kind of neat poem. I see the arrow as a symbol for anger, the damage we can do to a relationship. Whether my interpretation works or not, you can know that I enjoyed reading this and I am glad I found your poem. Peace, L&T

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