Sunday, December 22, 2013

All Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm really starting to hate this life.
Living in this house without a wife.
Another night home alone.
My heart has turned to stone.
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Khairul Ahsan 22 December 2013

You have expressed your feelings of loneliness beautifully. I hope you will soon find a friend with whom you will be able to share your joy and sorrow. 'I have never been very open. My feelings have always been broken. I truly love everyone I know. That doesn't stop these tears to flow. I do not feel like I have a place. So this is why I make my case.' These lines say how lonely you feel. You need someone to share your life. The poem conveys original feelings. I give it 10/10.

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