All Along This Is Where I Belong Poem by Seairra Kyger

All Along This Is Where I Belong

Rating: 3.9


Flittering eyes
Lay shut
For silence
While necks
Keep choking
To see
And lips
Refuse to hear
My endless talks
Of reasoning

Your eyes
Lie to me
I can’t make
My eyes say
Tell you
To go away
But I won’t
Make you stay
If I honestly
Follow my heart

You crushed me
My gentle wings
Losing sleep
In a blanket
Of lost memories
I’m going blind
Form lumps
In my throat
And mute
From tears
In my eyes

Let me go
Lay me down
Down in earth
But remember me
Cause I’m dying
I swear
But please
No crying
For me

I’m tired
Of the lies
So here now
I say my goodbyes
I won’t be here
Much longer
So let me go
So lay me down
In earth tonight

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a story of crushed love and ending in suicide. The person in the story is so sad that their very senses and mixed up and confused. And in the end they are letting go and what none to feel remorse for them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ankur Natu 04 May 2010

brava! ! ! ! .....makes you appreciate the beauty in sadness itself....i have written a short poem on similar topic bt i hv contradictory view on it....its called 'Sliced wrists, Hanging necks'....chk it out if u want to.... :)

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Ingrid Mott 04 May 2010

Well, I enjoyed reading it. Well written, flowing to the end, Sad and Sort of Creepy, Edgar Alan Poe a bit.

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Taylor Niemi 05 May 2010

This is really good! Keep writing, your poems are awesome.

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i love u babe (tandi) 05 May 2010

its sooooo beautiful in an awsome way hahaha love it :)

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Mahanish Jung Thapa 04 May 2010

though less jumbling of words but selected brilliantly and each line connected beautifully. Cheers :)

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oober good :) truly unique :) loved it!

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Afzal Shauq 04 May 2010

thanks for sharing a so sweet poem and words..really ts so impressive one and meaningful too..lovely idea and well expressed...hmm so great

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