caleb nathanael gonzales

Rookie (5/13/1992 / shafter california)

All In The Past - Poem by caleb nathanael gonzales

i use to dream
it use to be my life
i thought i was good
i wanted something
gave everything
and in the end
got nothing
dreams said i would go far
they were lying
they were a mirage
its who i was who i wanted to be
it was my mask in hard times
who i turned into when i was down
dont give up!
i need to
what is it good for anyways
its worthless
it was my first love
i was what i did, so, who am i now?

Comments about All In The Past by caleb nathanael gonzales

  • (2/11/2010 9:18:00 AM)

    WOW this is a reallly good poem... i loved every word! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (1/29/2010 12:47:00 AM)

    that last line hit me...i was what i did, so, who am i now?

    wow its really good keep at it youre a hell of a lot better than you think
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

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