Sunday, November 29, 2015

Alone Comments

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If there ever were a time
that I needed someone near.
That time would be now
if it wasn’t for my fear.
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Verna Torres
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Howard Savage 11 January 2016

It's hard being alone, and even harder being lonely.

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Kelly Kurt 30 November 2015

A very sad poem in many ways, Verna.

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Saadat Tahir 30 November 2015

You deserve better than that and I deserve to be alone. quite a statement there.....apart from the poetic and allegorical aspects...why not let the other person decide...isn't it second guessing gone a bit wild the poem is nicely crafted, the flow is good and its well schemed lucid and very readable.. liked

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