Alone Poem by live to die

Alone

Rating: 5.0


Alone at last
not as great a some would say
but to get your thoughts through
is the best time
Darkness is apearing
the sun still above
wheres it coming from
Death creeps closer and closer
awaiting me to
go in a enternal sleep
trying to fight it but
cant stop the darkness from
coming over me into death
I go this is not to bad
alone at last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

shadows that want to sink you in blocking out your light but do really want to stuck there or are you looking for another way out your heart is one that makes me want to know more

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Linda Brooks 11 June 2008

I love this peom. You seem like an interesting person to talk to.

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Evaughn Gray 30 November 2007

that was beautiful..i loved it, yoiu expressed it very well..~hazel

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