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*alone*

Rating: 2.8

what should be an invigorating freshness
a chill inside (shaking heart beats)
traffic on the road silent rising clanking passing
(silent again)

phone rings silence, recorded voice speaks
a real person with taped speech
(a recorded message would be better?)
selling cheap energy

i think i will buy some flowers
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Doris Cornago 14 January 2014

Mesmerizing, I needed to find this man again so as not to be alone. Thank you David for this timely warning.

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Raj Nandy 16 November 2009

YOUR POETIC LINES INDEED HEIGHTENS THE FEELING OF LONELINESS! YET IN THAT SILENCE YOU FIND YOURSELF TO RETAIN YOUR INDIVIDUAL BEING! 10 + -Raj Nandy

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Fiona Davidson 17 May 2009

Amazing write David so much insight in it...10++++

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