Monday, June 29, 2009

Alone Comments

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Being alone
being this oneness
like a straight candle
just lighting
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Elvira Kay
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Elvira K. 29 June 2009

it's about living your life to the fullest, while waiting for 'the one' ;)

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Adi Cox 29 June 2009

I thought that this was a poem about loneliness, then I thought maybe 'me with my light' suggests a significant other and 'burning down with pain' represents the difficulties that relationships create. Solitude is not loneliness. So the line 'The years of solitude' could mean a private affair between two people. Please let me know, I am intrigued. This poem is impenetrable to me.

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