Thursday, February 1, 2018

Alone In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is shutting down in front of my eyes
And I stand like a boy, lost in the rains,
Chilled, Lonely and Frightened.
It was a tempest of life that came without a call
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Vineeth Mohandas
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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Loneliness and grief nicely expressed.. Well constructed lines. ++10

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