Alone In The Universe Comments
When you were around, you were my protection
I know it was kinda hard, but you did it to perfection
You were so protective
Sticking on me like adhesive
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I like the way your poems address the 'Big Questions'. Keep up the good work...
Ali this is a well construted poem and you are only eighteen you have got years ahead of you and many more great writes cheers Sylvie
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2/21/2026 10:25:01 PM # 1.0.0
Nice structure here & good rhythym. You are off to a great start.