Along The Milkyway Poem by Sez Farr

Along The Milkyway

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Along the night stars I walk
Past the milky way
Not a soul with whom I can talk
not a single word must I say

I walk alone on this same path
Over and over till I scream
As I will in my future as I did in my past
This is my life so it seems
To only love u in my dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adi Cox 26 October 2009

Nice poem Evil Sarah. I can relate to this poem. I have used similar imagary and metaphores to express the feeling of being emotionaly on the outside. Space is a lonely place. Did you know that our planet and solar system are part of the Milky way and that sound does not travel in space, it is a silent place. I like this poem because it is similar to something I would write. Keep up this excellent creative writing, from Nerdy Adi with an anorak on :)

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WILFRED JOHN 15 October 2007

DEAR SARA I walk alone on this same path WITH YOU. BUT YOU FORGET? CAN YOU REMEMBER ME, IAM WILFRED JOHN, YOUR BEST FRIEND. BE POSSITIVE.NO REVENGE. FORGIVE THEM, THOSE WHO CHEATED YOU.YOU ARE PROTECTED IN MY ARMS.YOU GOT ENOUGH STRENTH. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD POET. LOVE WILFRED JOHN

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