Saturday, December 8, 2018

Aloof Comments

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I look at myself with a look of pain
I look and ask; how comes to fail?
Wasn't I enough or lost I the trail?
The trail was I or I need again to sail.
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Mohamed Amine belhssen
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Chinedu Dike 08 December 2018

Well thought-out and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Mohamed.

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Mohamed Amine 09 December 2018

I appreciate you remarks Chinedu

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