Sunday, October 19, 2008

Am I Comments

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Look beyond what you can see
With eyes that judge before they know
What path I've walked
The dreams I've lost
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Kevin Fix
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Ashley Ormon 19 October 2008

This is a wonderful poem. It makes you think, if you actually took in consideration what others go through, and hesitate to judge them, your first thoughts of them may alter a lot. I wrote a poem similiar to this, but i think you've said it very well.

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