Saturday, January 4, 2003

Ambition Comments

Rating: 2.6

Kenton and Deborah, Michael and Rose,
These are fine children as all the world knows,
But into my arms in my dreams every night
Come Peter and Christopher, Faith and Delight.
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Candy Kelly 23 September 2004

Aline, nice rythme and flow. I like poems that have humor in them too. I'm not sure you need a question mark at the end of the last statement.

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