Amen, Amen! Poem by Saniya Galeyeva

Amen, Amen!

Rating: 5.0


Amen, amen!
You are whining.
But the monster is still dancing,
Drawing new paths for the fasting,
For the starving. You don't know
Where's the next place where you'll fall.
But when breaking someone's life,
You forgot of Karma, right?

Wednesday, October 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifespan,lifestyle,retribution
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the translation of my Russian poem 'Камень - аминь! '
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2017

The monster is still dancing doing again with trust the fasting. Beautifully narrated poem this is and excellently drafted. With righteousness we should perform karma for gaining virtue and happiness....10

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Saji G Praleyagiri 25 October 2017

Dear Saniya Ur. concept of life conveyed monster influence inlife. We've more or less similar idea ion life asI enshrined in my poem Monster Never Behind may U. read

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Saniya Galeyeva

Saniya Galeyeva

Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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