Saturday, January 3, 2015

An Electrical Engineer's Proposal Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hey Darling(ton) pair
You are a switch who turns me 'on'
Your sight is a lightning bolt that causes
'transients'in my nerve line;
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savita hari shankar
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Chinedu Dike 03 January 2015

The piece appears funny but makes a lot of sense. I like the articulation and insight of the poem as it captured the convictions of the Engineer. The beauty of poetry is in the articulation and conviction. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Savita Hari Shankar 26 December 2015

Thank you so much

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