An Ode To Love Poem by yamini peethambaran

An Ode To Love

Rating: 5.0


Was it shimmering thought?
Or just a whispering that-
Hit my drums,
Tuning my rhythm amazingly!
One decibel I awaited so long…
Was it you, or my illusion?
Waited for the panes to portray
Ah my mist she’s dancing in all frames
A grasp of breath, before I rest,
A grief, which shall torture me for ever?
Nay I know; the lines nay the fine sketches.
Breeze my dear call me, whisper in my ear
Caged in the turmoil of emotions-
I hung hooked and cooked
Is the Lake to merge in sea?
Flowing gushing in the tempest…
Will it with stand the blows of nature?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Remesh Kesavan 17 March 2012

Is the Lake to merge in sea. Great lines. Love is definitely a natural phenomena. Great work. Keep your good work.

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Catastrophe King 09 March 2007

One decibel I awaited so long… Was it you, or my illusion? .....Simply AWESOME....... You left me (the reader) speechless! Fantabulous..! ! !

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