An Open Letter To The Mystery Person Poem by Lansely Amantle Mothupi

An Open Letter To The Mystery Person

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The scent of your love
has a sweet smelling aroma
i sense it kilometers away
it drives me crazy

I ask myself, why do i fall so deep? ?
i try hiding away
but you always find my way
but you the act as if you don't care
emotional stress i really cant bare

i want to write A LETTER
in this letter
i want to plead with you
i want you to understand my deepest feeling
i try make the feelings fade away
in case you don't come my way

in this open letter
i want to ask for forgiveness
please forgive my insubordination
and my inconsideration
is it karma or cupid that got me blunted? ?
i am sorry if i harass your feelings somehow
but all i want is your deepest understanding

mystery person
why do i hear the echos of your voice
saying 'please hold on'
when my heart says 'let go'
mystery help me here

Friday, July 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
being true to someone you really love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 01 July 2016

What an interesting concept for a poem, and done do well. May you solve the mystery. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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