Monday, April 4, 2016

And You Thought You Were the Only One Comments

Rating: 5.0

Someone waits at my door. Because he is
dead he has time but I have my secrets-
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Mark Bibbins
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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2016

The poet seems to have made an earnest attempt to construct this poem but the words, though, selected painstakingly, do not convey anything sensible. I request the poet to revise the same.

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Seamus O Brian 19 October 2016

One of those poems where it is enjoyable and engaging, but still incomprehensible. Like vising my mother with Alzheimer's. I love her, but she makes no sense. I know that's redundant, but so is pointing it out.

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