Aidin Azarkerdar

Rookie - 3 Points (9/11/1987 / Iran)

Angel - Poem by Aidin Azarkerdar

go and look at the mirror
look to your face
look at your spirit
you look at your eyes
look at your minds
look at to your live
looke to your paradise
when you look yours
you see one angel
angel in triangel
you are an angel in a dark hell
you not burn into
cause you have a freedom
you be at liberty from world.
liberty from hell
you have freedom
cause you are an angel

Comments about Angel by Aidin Azarkerdar

  • (5/4/2008 6:50:00 PM)

    Great poem! It says so much and it gives you hope. I like it a lot! (Report) Reply

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  • (1/17/2007 10:37:00 PM)

    I love what the poem says, grammar could use some work, but if given a little work, it can become a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/12/2007 11:38:00 PM)

    why is the angel in a triangle? (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2006 4:15:00 PM)

    well that's a good start it's a really good poem but i can tell you have trouble with spelling and where words go (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 30, 2010

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