Angel

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go and look at the mirror
look to your face
look at your spirit
you look at your eyes
look at your minds
look at to your live
looke to your paradise
when you look yours
you see one angel
angel in triangel
you are an angel in a dark hell
you not burn into
cause you have a freedom
you be at liberty from world.
liberty from hell
you have freedom
cause you are an angel

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Sessor 04 May 2008

Great poem! It says so much and it gives you hope. I like it a lot!

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 17 January 2007

I love what the poem says, grammar could use some work, but if given a little work, it can become a beautiful poem

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Soul forgotten 12 January 2007

why is the angel in a triangle?

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Melissa Broomhead 30 November 2006

well that's a good start it's a really good poem but i can tell you have trouble with spelling and where words go

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